looking forward to the coloured version..

hmm.. interesting.. perhaps a more chunkier feel to the rocks at the bottom will give a more real feeling to it... but then again, it's abstract ... interesting there are no heads for the birds...

very realistic, firefly-chan! i've to say one of your best! awesome job on the face and hand!

she is very pretty! kawaii! (the photo & of course the doujin) the hair and shirt is excellent!

this is very beautiful drawing! top notch! the face is ver good!... just the neck seems too look more natural, but it's still very good, overall! good job!

kawaii! i guess she's a girl since she's wearing a skirt..

very nice colors..! looks very solid and layered! ..on a more constructive point.. i think the lines in her hair should be more 'flowing' to give it a natural look.. good work!

it's beautiful.. i once thought of taking up architecture.. this brings back memories... kudos for the wonderful details.. !

wow!.. i always consider drawings more than one character means more work also.. ..the girls' proportions are very well done. i've always like the way you color the skin.. note on girl on the right, with hair hiding her right eye. keep it up.